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It was 2006 and the world had progressed greatly since what happened in 1945
Our story starts in an airport located in the USA Smith Wilkins airport was regarded as one of the best in the world Wonderful staff, great agriculture and also hundreds of well packed shops Large monitors showed current events and also times of planes coming and going. The airport was well known for its quiet background and hospitably with hardly any complaints. No terrorists, no graffiti, not even any snakes on a plane type mishaps
No problems what so ever  


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Chapter 1: Jarak
The year was 1945 and in Germany and Henry tiverbridge was mad, He had just missed his train and this meant waiting for another to come which was not as fun as it sounded. He thought his life was unfair first his party had broken up and he had to go into hiding.
It had cost him thousands and many favours that people owed him but it was worth it. What ever life had in store for him now couldn’t be as bad as what could happen if the Russians captured him
Little did he know how wrong he would be?
It was very late when it happened
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